Perfect, all I can say is it would be better if you took out the errors. 5/5, Em x

Wow!
totally amazing.
I'm speechless.
This line:
Some of them say that suicide is a personal sin
This is not the right thing to do to face the problem
But I think this could be the fast and easy way to do
To end my unfinished business in this hilarious world

I could totally understand what you meant.
I went through this for almost 4 years and counting.
I gave you a 5/5!
keep up the great work.

*Val