by Chloe Johnson Jul 25, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
There she is |
by SheenaMarie
Love the third stanza especially well...the flow of this write is very nice 5/5 |
I love the emotion in this. It's sad how I can relate so well. 5/5 |
by Em
I love the story behind this poem. I know how your feeling or was feeling and it's never nice to not have the one you love but sometimes it's fort he best because we find someone better. I know it sounds strange but it's true. Things happen for a reason even though at the time we don't feel like they do. Broken hearts always fix themselves though. I like the flow, the rhyming, the style and the story. I love how you tell it, well written. 5/5, Em |
by Moon
Its Amaiizin... Ur Really Talented.. It Has Such a Deep Meanin.. ;) .. Keep That Up |
But someone should go |