Omg love this poem so heart-felt :) keep it up

Wow great work..... you kept me hooked the whole poem..
good job
Bradly..

Hey i just wanted to thank you for your advice, and youw ere so righhtt when i thought about it. i think im more in love with the idea of him rather than with him.. its only that i hoped and wished that it would be right this time, cause ive met wrong guys before and thought that maybe this time it could be It.. but it wasnt, but he will come one day.. I know he will.. or i hope my prince charmiing will come! hehe=)

But someone should go
And sit with her a while
-- Yes. They should.

Loved it.

Cayce

Its Amaiizin... Ur Really Talented.. It Has Such a Deep Meanin.. ;) .. Keep That Up

I love the story behind this poem. I know how your feeling or was feeling and it's never nice to not have the one you love but sometimes it's fort he best because we find someone better. I know it sounds strange but it's true. Things happen for a reason even though at the time we don't feel like they do. Broken hearts always fix themselves though. I like the flow, the rhyming, the style and the story. I love how you tell it, well written. 5/5, Em

I love the emotion in this. It's sad how I can relate so well. 5/5

Love the third stanza especially well...the flow of this write is very nice 5/5