This is amazing. The vocab is great and the flow is absolutely flawless. Every line just rolled off my tongue.
I got a bit stuck at this line though;
'The sands honesty battles the waves away'
I didn't quite get it at first, but I think that "sands" is supposed to be sands', but I don't know much about those ' things and where they are supposed to go haha.
I'll shut up now.
But really.. amazing piece.

ily

Very well written. This poem allowed me to see everything you were writing about and trying to say. Flawless, 5/5