Comments : Dreams Aren't Real [And Tears Are Just Lies]

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I can feel the panic ripple,
    I can taste fear on my tongue.

    *Those two lines were amazing. You have some really creative metaphors in your work. I admire that alot. Another great poem hun :) Keep it up. Nik*

  • 13 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Really liked this poem. The wording was great. It was a fast read and easy to understand. It was a good length.

    gave it a 5/5