As It Drops To The Ear

by Kelin Hurt   Jul 26, 2009


Color your scars
And understand a little more.

Loves soft mending
Will find its way.

Inside all of this
Loves forever into today.

Forever into tomorrow

Your love is high above
Looking past life's struggles

The sharp places of the mother.

As your dreams to dream find
The seems as it's in your daydreams
Of today.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Kelin Hurt

    Thanks for the comment but I think I messed this one up.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I was looking at new site members and found your poem. I enjoyed reading this. Has a sense of hope to your words. These 3 lines are powerful:

    Loves soft, mending
    Will find its way
    Inside all of this

    In this line did you intend to use seems or seams and its, I think should be it's.

    Find the seems as its in your daydreams

    Overall very well written. Welcome to the site by the way. Nice to see new members.

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