Comments : Wishes Fly Away [Never Come Back]

  • 15 years ago

    by VanityIllusions2

    Wow you really have a way with words, what were you thinking about?

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Dandelion wishes,
    Drift on the wind,
    Blow out your breath
    and all your sins.
    Let 'em die today.
    It's time to let go.
    Tears don't matter
    When no one knows.

    *This was my favorite stanza. I really like the way it sounds. It just really caught my attention. I think you did a great job with this poem. The flow was great and I enjoyed it from start to finish. Nik*

  • 14 years ago

    by Ducky Ramone

    Great poem! i really loved the flow.

  • 13 years ago

    by MisguidedGhost

    This is an ahhmazing poem, you're a really good writer.(=

  • 13 years ago

    by MisguidedGhost

    This is an ahhmazing poem, you're a really good writer.(=