Teeth sunk into my
throat.
*Such a dark image. I loved it. Very eye catching.*

Smoke lit up my world today,
And I don't seem
to care somehow.
*I love how you ended this. You talk about the world exploding but you seems so calm....which gives me an even sadder feeling. Makes me realize that you didn't care if you lived or died. I agree with the poet above, the emotions you used here are so raw but also clear to understand. Very nice work. Keep it up ^.^ Nik*