Altaire I have to say that this free verse poem was really good. The flow was good through out the poem and the emotion can really be felt and that is good. The meaning of this poem was good and you did a great job showing how you are sorry for what you have done and now you must move on. The poem overall had a couple spelling errors and that's about all so keep up the good work and keep writing. -Jad

I think that your poems are really great. and also have a meaning to them that relates to lots of people.

I like it a lot! it reminds me of a situation that Ive been trough before

Well done