Is it abnormal to seek death?
Perhaps it's an aberration,
a start of a circulation,
my heart's pumping lifeless blood.

*This stanza was flawless to me :) I always love your diction...simply amazing word choice. I look forward to that when I read your pieces. I love how in some places it rhymed and in others it didn't sometimes that bothers me but I liked it here. I felt you told an interesting story in a very well written way. I love your work hun. You never fail to amaze me. Keep it up. Nik*