Stories too hard to tell.

by SpriteRight   Jul 29, 2009


Shadows bring comfort,
screams bring us joy.
We're living to die,
with breaths that destroy.

Glory upon us,
has risen from deep.
No shoulder to cry on,
no reason to weep.

Given the life,
broken down hell ...
it leaves darkened stories,
too hard to tell.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Clown

    Peverse, capsolated remence of something bigger and untold. What is it that your not saying in this poem, perhaps a secret failure in death? A trial of your faith or there lack of in God? There is something deeper in this poem and I do not intend to find out, I enjoy the mystery that poets of today have long forgotten about. It gives off an old flavor of Edgar A. Poe or a simulation of the darker Robert Frost that never made the publications. Of course this is of my own veiw. I truely enjoyed this read, short and simple, yet haunting.

  • 15 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    This poem flowed really well.
    I always think that's an important thing for me.
    I hate awkward pauses.

    screams bring us joy.
    -- Favorite line. It's just so.. disturbing.

    Great job.

    :]

    Cayce