by Hollow Emotion Jul 30, 2009
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Can't stand to see your face |
Excellent poem! I think if you moved it to a category in sad or love poems you'd get more hits. More people should be reading your work, this was excellent, again beautifully written, flowed really well, each line worked really with the last. |
by mandy
I like the ending and the idea of the poem. Relatable, and easy to follow. The only thing I suggest working on is the flow. Great write, |