Amen to that lol |
by Ingrid
Silvia, |
by Cindy
Sylvia |
Impressive!! I think everyone has said it already.. very well done, a great message with only a few words. Loved the form you used. Well done w/ the rhyme, it was not forced like many poems are. :] |
by Meena Krish
I feel like there is a hidden message for |
by kelleyana
Waw, this is great. I think this is a strong message to move on and no needs to look behine. Love it, 5/5, kel. |
by Dreamofolwin
A brilliant write Sylvia... I just love it, and the message it holds! Loved the form too , nice one :) |
JUST GOES TO SHOW THAT YOU THINK YOU HAVE SEEN OR READ MOST TYPES OF VERSE OR POEM WHEN SOMETHING NEW COMES ALONG TO YOU, LOVE NEW CHALLENGES WILL IN THE NEAR FUTURE TRY ONE MYSELF. REALLY IMPRESSED WITH YOUR PRESENTATION AND ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH, WORTHY OF MY 5/5 RAY S |