This poem is so sad. the flow isreally good.

I'm sorry for so many things, so many unspokens
most of all i'm sorry I couldn't save you from choking.

this is my favorite part even if its really sad. great job.

This is a very sad write, the repitition of the words 'im sorry' was used very well =]

The flow was carried through nicely and the rhyming was very good. A short poem but one that held a lot of emotion and got the point across.

I just felt like this piece was missing something. Depth, perhaps. Or strength.

(I don't mean this a an insult, by the way.)

Brad

P.S. Please comment and vote honestly on every poem you read.