*Speechless* What an adorable write for someone who you love. Sometimes all that love just comes oozing out from our hearts cause we cant hold it any longer. I know that feeling! It seems like its save to say that you think this person is your 'everything' Best of luck! I hope they feel the same!

Well done. :]

I love how u write hun!! its really amazing. This poem is so adorably cute and makes u want to cuddle lol. Great job

What a emotional and open poem. Your friend should embrace your talent and your love.
A perfect combination
This was very creative and impressive

Wow this is so wow i don't know what to say but you are amazing.you have express the way you feel or love that somebody keep up the good work.well done

Wow this is a beautiful and well written poem wow i was just blown away

Well every word you wrote here I can completely relate to and I've felt the same way for a long time. No matter what we do or what we see it always reminds us of the person we love. Probably because we can never stop thinking about them and they never leave our minds. Excellent imagery and flow 5/5