Comments : The road of destiny

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I like this
    Not like anything I have ever read before
    It hit home
    I liked how you told the roads
    I liked how you started and ended this poem.
    Our life is based on the life we want
    The roads are filled with many twists and
    turns there will be plenty of backstabbing
    people and plenty of liars.
    I don't like people who lie but yet again
    everyone does. But I don't like those who
    make a living out of lying to others.
    The roads are filled with people who rape and murder people who lie and steal.
    Yet again there are those who are so passoniate and loving yet have some
    of those backstabbing qualities.
    Were all humans and the life we live
    is short you can die today tomorrow 1 year from now or even 40 years from now.
    This just spoke to me halping me to open
    my eyes and notice what road I am leading.
    5/5
    Take Care
    -Kortney

  • 15 years ago

    by The Queen

    It was an interesting write...It seems like you were frustrated when you wrote this...However look at the brighter side of life..your family and friends, i'm sure you will be able to find and write good things from them...Keep writing..:-)