They all just should leave me alone
deep in my heart, deep in my soul
i just want to feel whole

*I can really relate to this part. Very sad poem but so heart felt and full of strong and clear emotions. I really enjoyed this poem. It was very short, but I loved every word. Keep it up hun Nik*

Wow
so simplistic yet i love it !!!

A very sad, heartfelt write Jay, Lol. " I just want to feel whole" Depression can make us feel empty and void, and we just want to feel "whole" again. Very wel written and expressed Jay,

Take good care, and all the best ,
Olwin.

A very good job . I liked the emotions displayed and the ring of truth in your words. It's hard to find that person inside that makes us whole. Since we are the only ones that can do that.
Take care Good write