The description and emotions in the poem were very well written.

One thing you could work on is your flow.
I see you enjoy rhyming, so here is a little tip:

Write all your emtions down, and then after, arrange them into a steady flow pattern. Also, writting with the same amount of sylables in a stanza is very effective as well.

"I love to dance (4)
I love to sing (4)
come and get up (4)
lets shake that thing!" (4)

Anyways, that's it. Just a couple of things you might want to look at. Other then that, I really enjoyed the poem. You have a very unique way of putting things. Great write!

Very powerful and somewhat beautiful. 5/5, Em