This was really beautiful and greatly portrayed. It is hard to go through "unrequited love", but this poem detailed the feelings so perfectly. 5/5

Wow a great write, so beautifully written it shows that it comes from the heart
great readX5/5X

This is so beautiful. I absolutely love it. It's enjoyable to read and is really well described. 5/5.

Oh, yes. I like the way you put this together. Very strong emotions in here. A very good job of letting the reader feel your words.