by Jessica Aug 2, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Sit back and relax while I tell you my tale |
A good piece, I feel. Though I didn't have a particular favourite stanza, I did have a favourite rhyme; |
by Sylvia
Very well done. Held my interest to the very last word. |
Not too many people can write such a great story on this site with excellent flow and keep the readers attention throughout.. yet you can! This was amazing, so suspenseful and had me on the edge of my seat. Each line so smooth and rolled off my tongue. Well done, this was impressive and something different! :] |
by Ingrid
Wow.....what a great story, so full of suspense! |
by KemistryKia
[[loved]] itt... |