by lexie Aug 2, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I am numb. |
by Skyfire
I actually really liked the beginning and the ending. One thing you might consider is adding an extra space before that last line, "Someday." to give it a little more weight. |
This was a deeply sad poem. *Hugs* yet somehow you managed to show hope. A beautiful poem. |