Great poem! I'm sure many people can relate. It sucks to have a love that isn't returned :/ great words and nice structure here :D

It's horrible to love somebody that doesn't love you back but it's worse when they pretend too. 5/5, Em

If you will give up or face the challenges inside.

Your love to her is just like a river,
Whose clear and fresh water continues to run
To give life to those living things around it
And balance the ecosystem of this world

Lovely lines.....

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Lovely poem