A beautiful write, this could almost be put under love I think, but its up to you. Loved to see you trying a different format, the longer lines paid off. Well done! |
by Ingrid
Beautiful, dear Silvia:) |
by Cindy
Great job on the club challenge :) I get this sad feeling when I read this piece. Longing for someone that isn't with you....I know those feelings so well. |
I agree with everyone. Sad but romantic. I don't normally like repetition but you made it work in this case. Good job |
by Dreamofolwin
Wonderful :) I loved reading this Sylvia. Yes ... sad but romantic... just beautiful! |
I think this poem is really great and as I have said many time before my admiration for the new and old members of our sight grows daily, |
by Meena Krish
A yearning heart that wishes for love's |
by imyours4now
I absolutely love this poem. It's filled with emotion. I wrote a poem that sot of has the same meaning, could you please check it out? It's called 'My secret love' |