Comments : If Only

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    A beautiful write, this could almost be put under love I think, but its up to you. Loved to see you trying a different format, the longer lines paid off. Well done!

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Beautiful, dear Silvia:)

    This is a love poem!

    I love this verse, I have these feeling too for someone....

    I hope we both will have what we long for;)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job on the club challenge :) I get this sad feeling when I read this piece. Longing for someone that isn't with you....I know those feelings so well.
    Excellent!
    Love Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I agree with everyone. Sad but romantic. I don't normally like repetition but you made it work in this case. Good job

  • 15 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Wonderful :) I loved reading this Sylvia. Yes ... sad but romantic... just beautiful!

  • 15 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    I think this poem is really great and as I have said many time before my admiration for the new and old members of our sight grows daily,
    simply because I never get bored reading their poems though at time I can wander why.
    I am glad to say this poem is going into my excellent and with my favourites it is beautifully craft and balanced and it stirred me. 5/5 Ray S

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A yearning heart that wishes for love's
    presence...nicely written.

  • 15 years ago

    by imyours4now

    I absolutely love this poem. It's filled with emotion. I wrote a poem that sot of has the same meaning, could you please check it out? It's called 'My secret love'

    5/5 well done!