What a sensual poem, Deana:)

Nothing forced about this write, it flowed and rhymed and made me see truly passionate images and it jiust oozes sweet love:)

Gentle power, a raging storm
Fulfill two hearts desire

^^
It's funny how this can be gentle and forceful at the same time, but it is..unless you have a real brute on your hands, lol!

Nice work, my friend!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Beautifully penned. Excellent flow and word choice!

Lovely flow and a very well depicted poem indeed. I liked the binding of the words. Very well written!

Oh, yes. Very strongly worded. Very emotional throughout. Well done.

You painted a scene of such sweet love and affection. this was a very pleasant read =) 5*