I LOVED this poem, the persepective is just a goor revealing of these emotions. Though sad, i was very happy with this... :

U nailed it damn nice use of imageries i lovd it

After so much yearning and confusion, I find that the simple things are the only things that matter and that relationships need'nt be so hard nor life so serious and depressing. I feel your pain and like your writing. I t is powerful and i feel it!