I love the repetition and idea of "Forget get, forget me not" and this has a great message to it. Admitting your flaws but then giving examples of what makes you a good person. I really enjoyed this, good job.

This brought back the old nursery rhyme she loves me, she loves me not when we where kids pulling the petals of a dandelion. Only with a lot of feeling and despair with the aftermath of hope. Only hope the outcome whatever is a relief, been there done it enough said. The flow seemed to be missing somehow maybe it was because of what you were trying to convey? Very difficult to get right ! Though I don't think this idea is unique it is the first time I have seen it used on this site so I will succumb to its excellence 5/5 Ray S

I really thought this was creative, something new, the repetition of "forget me, forget me not", it added a nice touch to this piece, and strengthed the message. What I got out of this piece is you expressing yourself, wanting that person but saying that they would be better without you, admitting your flaws and letting it all out. You are going back and forth and are unsure, at least that is what I got from this piece. You expressed yourself very well, and got the reader to relate and understand what you were going through. Hope all goes well, take care.

~MaryAnne

Wow, really excellent:) loved it

I like how this poem sort of was like the "He loves me.. He loves me not" game. I thought it flowed very nicely together and overall I was impressed:)
5/5

Love it <3

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