Emptiness

by Angel Tears   Aug 3, 2009


Hearts falter
Time stands still
A sacrificial altar
Prophecies fulfilled

Sunlight shatters
Darkness sinks
Reality in tatters
Emptiness blinks

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  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Short and fly. lol. it was good for being so short. i give it a 5/5, even though I wished it to be longer. ttyl.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sadespair

    Simple, yet exquisite. Just Wonderful. :)(:

  • 15 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    The old adages are the best, 'Short but sweet'. I love this poems title and its simplicity, yet with hidden complexities another excellent piece from your excellent repertoire. Ray S 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    The old adages are the best, 'Short but sweet'. I love this poems title and its simplicity, yet with hidden complexities another excellent piece from your excellent repertoire. Ray S 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Deana

    This is short but very good! You can feel despair in the words...well done!

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