by Deana
So true, we ourselves are what we should fear! well done...I liked the rhyme scheme you used...it worked well for this poem! |
How many times in my life have I woken in a cold sweat only to see myself in my dressing table mirror. Your poem truly had me back there feeling like I had a hundred times before the dark fear that our dreams sometimes bring us and the sudden waking for no apparent reason. Brilliant and well written all an excellent poem should have 5/5 Ray S |
How many times in my life have I woken in a cold sweat only to see myself in my dressing table mirror. Your poem truly had me back there feeling like I had a hundred times before the dark fear that our dreams sometimes bring us and the sudden waking for no apparent reason. Brilliant and well written all an excellent poem should have 5/5 Ray S |
by Sadespair
The feeling is known. |
by Dreamofolwin
I loved reading this :) Very funny... and very true! HaHa. Well done! |
by Em
Lol always happens to me. xx |
by Sylvia
It might not be laugh out loud funny but all of us who have been through this can see the humor in your words. Well done. |