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  • 15 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Kelly beautifully done. A creative write full of emotions. Well done

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Full of love and vivid images. He's a lucky man. Well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    A poem full of love! Emotions seem so genuine to me. Nicely written!

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Well Kelleyana,

    Your husband is a very lucky man to have such a devoted wife:)

    Looking at the rainbow right after the rain
    that kisses the sky and comforts her heart from all her cries

    ^^
    Very poetic words:)

    Much tenderness and love displayed within your words and in spite of a few minor flaws this truly was a delight to read!

    Je t'embrasse

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Kell
    What a beautiful poem of love you have penned dear. So much emotion coming from your words. I can feel the love and passion . Yet a undertone of sadness.
    Excelent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Robert Kerry Gardiner

    Kelleyana,

    This poem was beautifully written. The word choice was great and the imagery created was very nice, good work on this poem, keep it up

    Kerry Gardiner

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Kelleyana I loved how you wrote this poem with so much emotion and thoughts. 5/5. Em x