Luuu..I loooooved this poem
it's wonderful, your word choice and the rhyme is bee-you-tee-ful!
I'm so proud of you hunnie!
Way to go
~hugsss~

Vivid imagery, nice word choice and flow. Good rhyme scheme, it isn't forced. Great job!

Wow what an awesome poem...after reading the poem you feel that sense of being reborn yourself. The descriptions in this piece were so soothing & were so beautiful in their own. I really loved this, very well done.