Dying

by Lady Nik   Aug 4, 2009


I've lost the one thing that
made my soul pure...
that one thing was you.
Winter is not winter
without chilly nights
and frosty mornings.
Just like I am not me
without you...

How does one save the dead?

That's how I feel right now..
dead...simply dead.
Like nothing will ever
make me breathe again...
nothing except your
forgiveness....your love
again. But I am not
naive enough to believe
you still care..

Does dying hurt?

I wonder as I bleed
out pain that has followed the
flow of my unsteady blood.
I can't understand
how we fell so hard...
but I have no marks to
show how we struggled...
All I can say is sorry...
a simple word..I know
but true lies in its simplicity.
I love you...what a funny saying
when you're dying

I always wondered what death was like...I guess I'll know soon enough.

*Just venting...please don't leave comments on how to improve. Thanks*

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  • 15 years ago

    by guy named Guy

    Another great poem by someone with a very gifted talent.. im so glad you get that from me.. LMAO!!!! just kidding nik.. loved the poem..

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a very sad piece you have penned. The pain and agony can be felt as the reader reads your words.
    Good job!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Maegan Bravo

    There's no need to improve. I enjoyed this poem very much so.

  • 15 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    [[loved]] itt...[[5]]/5

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