[[loved]] itt...[[5]]/5

There's no need to improve. I enjoyed this poem very much so.

What a very sad piece you have penned. The pain and agony can be felt as the reader reads your words.
Good job!
Take Care
Cindy

Another great poem by someone with a very gifted talent.. im so glad you get that from me.. LMAO!!!! just kidding nik.. loved the poem..