by Dreamofolwin Aug 4, 2009
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
This poem came to mind today, and just thought I'd submit it :) It's the first poem I wrote as a child when I was 12 or so, and just thought I'd submit it for fun! and because it's special to me :) |
What a great write. It amazes me that you wrote this at 12, it is very well done. Not much more to say on this one. :) |
by Cindy
Olwin what a beautiful poem of Faith :) Thanks for sharing this with us :) |
I think it is everyone's mission in life to end up going to heaven. i thought that the poem was great and the imagery created was very nice, keep up the nice work |
by Jay Perry Jr
Its great to have a God that forgives. Great job on this poem i love it :) |
by Sylvia
It is special and for a child of 12 it was well written. God does forgive our sins and accepts us. Your words describing heaven fit my thoughts as to how it will be. Well done. |