by Alicia Aug 5, 2009
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Sometimes we lose people we love, |
by Alicia
Thanks :] |
by Captivat3d
I really liked your poem, it says a lot of things that are true in this world. I think you could work a little bit more on your punctuation and work on the flow. I think the transition needs a little work but other than that, I like the topic! Keep it up! :D |