Your work is amazing as always.

"That of fresh baked bread coming from a shop,
The perfume that's you it can make my heart stop,
A field of flowers whose smell makes me sneeze,
Or
Those wild aromas caught on a summer breeze."

We relate to sights as memories or sounds but smell is a more powerful sense then any.
You are a creative writer that I am so glad I discovered your works

My favorite memory, waking to the smell of coffee in my grandmas house. It still comforts me to this day

Awesome job

Ray,

Indeed: so many beautiful sensations come to us through our senses..you said it so well.
I love the smell of freshly mowed grass most of all, it makes me feel so happy and alive.

Good job on this, I think you covered all bases with it and the ending was great:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Ray... I loved reading this... A wonderful poem so beautifully expressed. I loved how you brought the senses into this poem of love, and how it ended...
" My senses were filled by much more than above,
When you told me you loved me and gave me your
Love. "

A most descriptive write... and a very enjoyable read! I thought it was excellent! ... (It filled my senses! )

Take care,

Olwin.

Your words made all the senses come to life. I could almost smell the things you described. What a wonderful way to write about love. True love does fill the senses. Well done.