Hide and Seek. [Lira]

Excellant !!! I liked this work of yours and it fit perfectly into my search tonight for a poem worthy of reading twice... cool runnings mon.. very nice

Grrrrrrr sorry about that Temps

I was saying that line sounds like something I would say. I really liked this poem. It's so short but very large in it's meaning. I think you did a great job with it. Keep it up ^.^ Nik

Jeez..again...I will comment earlier nect time lol

asylum; playing hide and seek

*Perfect line...I loved it. Sounds like something

Temps you created such beautiful imagery in this write. The "playing hide and seek" gave such a cute touch to this piece and made me smile.

You hit the actions of a rabbit dead on with the word "energetic" ... boy there are some days I wish I were a rabbit or at least had the energy of one .... lol

Great read, excellent job on the form.
Loved it !

Temps
It is so nice to see you tried the Lira form....we just did this as a challenge in my club. You did a excellent job with the form :)
Take Care
Cindy