Comments : A wonderful experience

  • 15 years ago

    by Biya

    He looks at me with his two stars
    Silk like a diamond
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    Suddenly , i wake up
    I find myself in front of this two stars
    My afraid was right
    But it was a wonderful experience

    Nice one .. it was a experience when he was about to kiss you n u woke up.. dear :)
    Love this poem

    biya

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Wow, I love the imagery that you are sleeping and dreaming this wonderful dream when all of a sudden this beautiful goes to kiss you and you wake up. It seems like a truly, wonderful experience, expressed to the fullest. Well written, 5/5. Em

  • 13 years ago

    by mira

    I really hope if i'll have the same experience
    nice write siham go on!!;)