Wow, this poem shares and tells the story that so many all over the world know and fear every single day and night.
Having gone through some things this poem mentions, I feel you have captured the dynamo of emotions incredibly well.

can't wait to read more.

This got my blood pumping. I was dating a girl a year ago, and her father abused her so i found out one day while she stayed at my house, cause she did not wanna go home, so i found out and took my anger about abuse, and beat the dude. But thats my past, enough of that. 5/5 on this and thnks fr th comnt. ttyl

It has been awhile since i have read a poem that brought tears to my eyes, well you did it.
Very sad, but written so well. It all just fit together so perfectly. this is one of the best pieces i have read in a while.
thanks 4 the comment

suicidalkansas

p.s 5/5