by Sylvia Aug 8, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
One day you will come lay with me |
by Cody B
Great job Sylvia. This poem had a very soft touch to it. Every line seemed so kind and meaningful. I love how you expressed the emotion of love in such a beautifully way. 5/5 |
by Cody B
Great job Sylvia. This poem had a very soft touch to it. Every line seemed so kind and meaningful. I love how you expressed the emotion of love in such a beautifully way. 5/5 |
This was really beautiful to read. great job! seriously. never give up on this amazing talent you clearly have. would you please read and comment on my "scars" poem?? i would love some feedback. |
by Tom Swart
A very nice tender write that I enjoyed reading more than once. You have a lovers heart and the poet within you gives it wings. The words you chose were a pleasure to read and speaking your poem out loud was even better. nice - bravo |
by Dreamofolwin
Soft, tender poem about the one you love. |