Silvia,

this was a verse with a velvet touch. I love to call the one I love angel too, although a man might not be charmed to be called such ( for fear of not being tough enough in our eyes, perhaps)
I love the tenderness within these words, my emotions for a man are like that too. There can never be enough tenderness and softness displayed towards these beautiful creatures, I feel:)

What if I fall or disappoint you my darling?
That is my greatest fear.

^^
Trust his judgement, sweetheart;)

Lovely poem, so tranquil and sweet. You did great, Silvia!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

This is what everyone hopes for. Love unconditional that when we fall flat on our faces that certain someone will lift us up and brush us off . With arms that still reach out.
I really liked this poem. It was gentle and loving and impressive

How beautiful...this is the love everyone dreams of and only a few are lucky enough to find.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

I think I read your poem at least 10 times and kept coming back to read it again. I don't know how to comment on something like this, I loved it. The words are easy to relate to. A beautiful write.. you did a great job.

Sylvia.

I thought that your poem was great, such strong emotions flow through your heart in this piece if it is true. In the short life that I have lived I have found that longing for love is the toughest thing to go through, and longing for love from the right person is even tougher, great work on this post, love the message, keep up the great work

Kerry Gardiner

Soft, tender poem about the one you love.

"No other could linger on it's velvet pillow, Or adorn my heart with love and joy as you do"

These are beautiful lines... A wonderful poem Sylvia, so well written and expressed!

Soft, tender poem about the one you love.

"No other could linger on it's velvet pillow, Or adorn my heart with love and joy as you do"

These are beautiful lines... A wonderful poem Sylvia, so well written and expressed!

A very nice tender write that I enjoyed reading more than once. You have a lovers heart and the poet within you gives it wings. The words you chose were a pleasure to read and speaking your poem out loud was even better. nice - bravo

This was really beautiful to read. great job! seriously. never give up on this amazing talent you clearly have. would you please read and comment on my "scars" poem?? i would love some feedback.

Great job Sylvia. This poem had a very soft touch to it. Every line seemed so kind and meaningful. I love how you expressed the emotion of love in such a beautifully way. 5/5

Great job Sylvia. This poem had a very soft touch to it. Every line seemed so kind and meaningful. I love how you expressed the emotion of love in such a beautifully way. 5/5