by Sylvia
Love this. If only we could do that, turn back the time to a happier childhood and those games we played, hear the laughter. The good old days. (smiles) |
You are absolutely right..childhood flies by so fast, but its something fun to look back on, I remember those days when I played hop-scotch and hide and seek ;) Its amazing how we all grow up so fast! Well done. |
Love the poem cindy, i thought you did great on it. and I remember playing those games back in the day even though im not too old, great work, keep it up. |
Loved the poem. Those are games that even I miss at my age. It's a part of us that we give up to be adults :-( I vowed to never grow up . Not sure what happened |
by Dreamofolwin
I love poems about children and childhood days :) and I LOVED this poem. It's brilliant Cindy! We don't see many children playing these games now... How I use to enjoy playing all of these!... And I enjoyed your poem... EMMENSELY. Thankyou for it! |
Jump rope, hop scotch, hide-n-seek |
by ben thompson
Nice write, mom. 5/5. it'd be nice if those days would last. you dont realize how much you miss them till they are long gone. |
Yes, if only we could turn back time. But my friend, we ought to look forward to a bright future always.. As long as we're living and breathing fresh air, we can be big children. You don't have to grow up you know:p As the saying goes, never take life too seriously, you never get out of it alive anyways. |
by Nicko
What a lovely short poem its such an easy poem to relate to. Great first verse setting the tone of the whole piece |