..it's such a very nice start!..

i love this part of your poem:

As your name becomes glued with shame
You realize life is nothing but a dirty game
As those dear friends betray your trust
You absorb the shock changing slowly to rust

..this is so true about life..
..so true and soooo sad..: (

Such a beautiful yet heartwrenching poem. It was so unique. Very powerful stanzas. Well written, 5/5. Em