Clouded

Wow, this was a powerful write. I really liked this piece of poetry you wrote. The only thing that I didn't really like was the first line, but that's because it was a bit of a tounge twister. Other than that, fantastic job, keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

I loved it had great metaphors.

I was short, but filled with imagery... i loved it! Keep it up!

I enjoy this interesting 3rd person take on basically the life of a rain drop from a cloud...Makes me think of a cloud as a not so happy thing as most people in-vision them to be, but a dark cold dungeon in which the water is trying to escape from.

So short...but said so much...i like your wording.

great job :]