A very tender love poem, Deana...
The addition of the eye colors made it a very personal poem..

Time stood still, eyes locked in silence
Turquoise met the strength of jade

^^
Very spellbinding and something we all want to experience..such passion.

All your poems are beautiful, dear girl, this was no exception:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Deee :)
So proud of you..loved your poem, though I could see you do better.
Lovely imagery honey.
Way to go :)
Write on~

Deana,
this poem was so beautiful. i don't think there's anything else that can describe this.
i love the details, and how you used different colors to describe things.
it made it easier for me to picture everything in my head.
such a beautiful love poem, it deserves to be on the front page! lol

love,
Liz

Deana
What a beautiful poem of love. I have missed reading your verses.
Excellent job!
Take Care
Cindy

WOW i loved this poem, each stanza had an array of powerful words and meaning, and i loved how after each stanza there were those few words. It all built up to the fabulous end as well.

I donu what to say for you, you belong to a differen place ..realy u have such amazing-ness with words...like 1st the title caught me..then despie the tenderness in ur stanzas these lines
played a gr8 role
for the harmony of your poem

Come with me...

Stay with me...

Believe with me...

Love with me...

...lol i wana u write with me..lol..your gr8 !
5/5