by Keith
Really god poem, especially is english isnt your 1st language, keep it up |
by Em
I loved this. Everything seemed to fit together. |
This is an amazing poem my favorite stanza was the 1 stanza |
by Marvellous
Love announced, is simply deceit. Love is demonstrated kindness. |
Stellar! The best part of sta nza is "You'll remain in my eyes the greatest love" which indicates that he's the only one who would fill your eyes and this itself is great if accompanied with trust, faith and honnor. It can even come with the greatest results ever. I really enjoyed the style of repetition. |