Olwin
you did a wonderful job with this challenge. Your poem is beautiful :)
((Hugs))
Cindy

I agree with Cindy, it is beautiful. A wonderful expression of the love you feel for someone special. Good job with the form.

I really enjoy the simple and tender way you write love poems. Uncomplicated just beautiful. You did a great job on this challenge.

That is the feeling of pleasure as well as
happiness when the power of true love draws
you towards them...well done with the form!

Love should always be sacred and divine. Another amazing write. It seems as though you have a lot of love in your heart for someone. Very beautiful :)