Love ?

by groovydude   Aug 13, 2009


As I sit here with this hole in my heart
wondering how it all fell apart
I thought that when a mistake was made
the love between two made it better again

I guess I was wrong for thinking this way
if she loved me the same
then she would have wanted to stay

money and a job was her excuse
giving my heart emotional abuse

true love is supposed to conquer all......

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  • 15 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I agree with Colm . The last line pulled it all together. A good write with questions most have asked at some point in their lives

  • 15 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A sad write, Lol. Sometimes things don't turn out the way we thought they would. Because sometimes , sadly people change, and so does their love. Well written Grooydude.

    All the best...
    Olwin.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Love doesn't always make things alright. As you wrote one person may be in love and one in love with love, if that makes any sense. Well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very sad write...
    /true love is supposed to conquer all...... // well all I can say is love should not be marked by boundary... let it be free... love is not suppose to do anything :)
    nice write...

  • 15 years ago

    by CareBear

    Nice work. It's so true, sometimes love isn't enough, even when it should be.

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