Rain

by damont   Aug 14, 2009


Rain its where the love stories take place
where sadness first begins and where life sometimes come to an end.
such an amazing thing, its smell and sound is beautuful because it comes from the heavens.
Through the darkness of the day or night water falls and replenishes the earth.
every drop gravity takes control h20 water the stuff were made of.
it falls from the sky its what we wash up in sometimes......
Such a beautiiful thing and yet with it comes flashes of lightning where kids go and run and hide.
such beauty times are shared created made.
broken down, destroyed and put in its grave,. summary of it all in the skys rain falls.

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  • 15 years ago

    by The Queen

    This was a very elegant write (and when i say elegent i am not trying to make you feel good or something )only if you could use proper punctuations and put them in a proper format. Like in stanzas or probably if you want it that way..then caps after the period and stuff like that..I really liked how you portrayed the rain.mysterious and something most of us aprreciate.

  • 15 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    "Rain its where the love stories take place
    where sadness first begins and where life sometimes come to an end"
    I loved it. The beauty in your words was atounding. Well done :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    I like how u write so literal. you dont really compare things or really use metephors and it brings me back to earth. really interesting way to write.

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