I like how u write so literal. you dont really compare things or really use metephors and it brings me back to earth. really interesting way to write.

"Rain its where the love stories take place
where sadness first begins and where life sometimes come to an end"
I loved it. The beauty in your words was atounding. Well done :)

This was a very elegant write (and when i say elegent i am not trying to make you feel good or something )only if you could use proper punctuations and put them in a proper format. Like in stanzas or probably if you want it that way..then caps after the period and stuff like that..I really liked how you portrayed the rain.mysterious and something most of us aprreciate.