Wow Novalyn, that was breath taking. While reading it, I saw pure beauty being emitted via your excellent use of lexis. I have chills and I shed tears while reading this piece by you, just fantastically written in all aspects. You have a lot of talent my dear, keep up the great work. I am nominating this for sure.

Peace, Joe

Very intense write... the imagery is powerful and capttures the reader's attention...
beautifully penned...

Branch to branch
They create
A security to satiate.
They started together,
In heart; now apart
straying away from
directional fear.

*This was my favorite part :) I love the way you write. This was a very strong poem and the way you wrote it was very refreshing and original. Great work Nova *huggies* Nik

Congrats Novalyn:)

A much deserving win:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

I like the first part quite a bit with the few erratic rhymes creating a nice lyrical flow.

The second part falls flat though. 'in heart, now apart' sounds really really clumsy. And there's a feeling of incompleteness after reading the poem.